A Flower.

by sfiawong   May 21, 2006


< A flower >
By: sfiawong

This flower is so beautiful in the rain.

Please don't cut just let it grows my Dear.

You may destroy its beauty if you cut.

I want to keep it lasts longer in time.

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  • 18 years ago

    by sfiawong

    Dear Kaylee,

    Might be you are right, but I don't change it any more. I feel satisfaction on its feature now. Thank you for your opinion.

    Thank you so much.

    sfiawong

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I htink you mean grow not grows and lasting instead of lasts. You might want to comb it over. Also maybe make it more in depth if you can but that's up to you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is sweet. don't cut it just grow up it till end.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. thats so cute! i really liked it! keep up the good work! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    I liked that...It was very short but it was nice..>Greatjob!!

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