I like this poem a lot. Very nicely put. It has a great flow already, but the only suggestion I have to make it even smoother would be to take out some of the periods at the the end of a few of lines. Especially the ones where the last words rhyme. It would make it a whole lot less choppy =)
I really did like this poem. Very sweet and simple. Great write!
Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Thanks maybe ill try that next time