I really like this
It has a different point of view than I have seen before
It's really creative
5/5
Keep Writing

I'm honestly not a fan of the hole AA rhyming pattern, but you've made me really into reading it when it's well written. Once again, good stuf.

Great poem, very descriptive and truthful....in ways it was sad and then in ways it showed how you built yourself up from how far they put you down. . .very good
check out my work sometime and any advice or critism is welcome
thanks
~*~Amber~*~

This is such a lovely affectionate poem
a great write, keep it up
5/5 take care xx