by Lost & Delirious May 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A perfect picture the stars see, |
Great job, awsome word choice... but some of the words dont relate well together, they may sound good but not nesicaily together... |
Wow, that was so amasing and meaningful, the rhythm lost me a little in the middle but I loved the way it all wrapped up in the end, great work. |
I dont know what to say...wow, that was the best poem ive read in a long time...very good..the images in my head were very clear, it was refreshing to read, but sad. i liked that poem alot |
by LadyPearl
Wow, the first stanza is very catchy. Great imagery. |
by creeesta
Gabriella, this poems is beautiful. I can relate so much. You have a great way with words. Thank you for the comment on my poem. It means so much to me. I'm going to a tough time and stuff like that really make my life easier. I look foward to reading more of your work.♥ |