Aww.. dont worry hun! keep ur chin up and remember we're all here for yoU! great poem! i loved it.. :) it flowed well and your descriptions were excellent! 5/5

A very powerful and expressive peice. the feelings and descriptions were so strong that they completly engulf the reader, your choice of words is very effective and holds the reader thoughout.

the peice flows smoothly with no real areas of roughness and the structure is good. i found no areas of weakness to this peice, which is overall a very well written and expresed peice.

5/5

Wow you did a great job on this. It kept my attention from beginning to end. The imagery in it was amazing and the rhythm and flow was really good. You did a great job on this! Keep up the good work!

Speachless uterly speachless! Your words were PERFECT and welcome to my faverotes list!!!

W.O.W. This was fantastic. I loved it from start to finish. Flow and rhyme scheme were good. And imagery was good also. An awesome poem all over. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

`taleee xx

Wow this poem was..... just wow. i really loved it!!!!! you kept my attention the whole way thru!!! you are a great writer and i could picture this in my head as i read it... it flowed well and i thought it was really great :) -Jen-

Ohh wow, I am speachless....This poem was so amazing, one of the best I have ever read. It was perfect all the way throughj, from the beginning to the end, I loved it....Perfect, just perfect....I loved the way you involved the nature and desciped it so well, bleding it with the sadness, excellent!!! I relate 100%..

Hope things get better for you, all of my love - Sabrina

That was..So perfect. The Flow, Rythym..Wording.. I loved the wording. I twent very well with your poem. I just adore it. Really, sad. Yet, it's so..I don't know how to explain the feeling you get when you read it honestly I loved it. (=

That is an amazing poem... its perfect, flawless, the emotion is all there, and the flow is just stunning. I dont know what to say, every word hit me like wow, you did that so well. Good Job, and Keep your head up

Wow... Such a sad poem... powerful and emotional piece. Great write. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Iu LOVED this poem really sad but i know i have felt like that and it put my feelings into word wow i really loved this a fantastic job :D:D:D
xxALLYxx

Amazing Poem Truly Wonderful. 5/5 For Sure.
1 Thing Though- I Got Put Off SLightly By The Presence Then Absence Or A Rhyme Scheme. I Wasn't Sure If You Intended To Have One Then Stopped Or If It Was Coincedental(Sp?).

Still-Great Write!!

xLauren3

Gabriella, this poems is beautiful. I can relate so much. You have a great way with words. Thank you for the comment on my poem. It means so much to me. I'm going to a tough time and stuff like that really make my life easier. I look foward to reading more of your work.♥

Wow, the first stanza is very catchy. Great imagery.

I dont know what to say...wow, that was the best poem ive read in a long time...very good..the images in my head were very clear, it was refreshing to read, but sad. i liked that poem alot

5/5 excelent job!!!
~David Marshall~

Wow, that was so amasing and meaningful, the rhythm lost me a little in the middle but I loved the way it all wrapped up in the end, great work.

--Steph

Great job, awsome word choice... but some of the words dont relate well together, they may sound good but not nesicaily together...

Great job keep it up

Bri