Wow...my jaw might dislocate itself from grinning..

this is so lyrical and tender that i must reverberate all those lit kid fist-shakes right back at you, my dear

*does so with an insuppresible smirk*

I think you've heard me say this but here it goes

I hate couples ^_^ lol

You and Lenny-dear are too cute, so muchs o that I hate you, and I hate you and your fuxxing amazing poetry, you make me look bad. Stupid uber arts kids *shakes my fist at you and Lenny* Anywho, I'm glad you too finally got together. I'm so happy to see you both so....happy 0_o lol keep it up and just know with writing poems for your girlfriend you set a certian standard lol =] I love you both

Jenny

Wow........i have read this previously, but...this is INSANELY good! amazing poem, especially the outlook on love being some sort of a high place.it's an angle on love that is very unique.

Wow aidyn... you haven't been writing on here for a long time i can see, but then, neither have i! haha. Just in case you get this, This poem is amazing. don't stop, you've got a gift! don't waste it! I am impressed w/ how knowledgable you are on what you write. The "intermezzo" thing was such a great idea!!! GREAT JOB!!! hope you have fun on "this twisting road".
~Amy