This is a good poem.. i love vampires :)

Wow i think all of your poems are AMAZING....ive read them all and i have to say your one of the more creative people that ive seen on this site..great job

*claps and cries* marvelous simply amazing. if i ever wrote something 1/4 as good id be happy. that was like...breath taking. wow..243872635/5

Very nicely written. Cliche topic with you. You have to get away from what you're used to and write about other things. But, you still write very nicely. This is my favorite so far. The flow is beautiful.

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What a beautiful, stunning, powerful ending.
I loved every aspect of this...the imagery, the wording, the storyline behind it...wow.
This was beautifully and elegantly written, wonderfully penned.