Great job! 5/5 keep up the good work!!

Oh my gosh. that was SOOO good. thats the best poem ive read ever..or in a really long time. woah! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Fantastic!!!! top job, i loved it read well all the way through n it was fanfckintastic wel dun :)
danka
sxs

Hey i read all ur poems...yes all of them...lol...all like 200 lol...u write a lot and they are all really good...the 8 rules is great...but i just figured i'd comment just one instead of all of them...lol...and htnx for the comments...let me know when u get some more in here...yours are really good...well later...

*Kenya Dawn*

Hey i read all ur poems...yes all of them...lol...all like 200 lol...u write a lot and they are all really good...the 8 rules is great...but i just figured i'd comment just one instead of all of them...lol...and htnx for the comments...let me know when u get some more in here...yours are really good...well later...

*Kenya Dawn*

Wow this is so sad and u hv yet again potrayed it so beautifully, ur poems are just so amazing and full of emotions

all the best and take care
5/5

Good poem, very intense and lots of great imagery. I really liked it. However, I would personally change the "no more" on the last line to "anymore."

Wonderful job! I really liked the way the rhyme flowed! thx 4 the comment!
amandaxOx
*5/5*

Wonderful job! I really liked the way the rhyme flowed! thx 4 the comment!
amandaxOx
*5/5*

Woww.. this was just oozing emotion! excellent is one word that describes it! this was so beautiful.. i just loved it! 10/5! xox

This is such a sad sad poem....really touching......really well written...nice job.

OMG! THAT WAS SUCH AN AWESOME ENDING!!
I LOVE IT!!
100% Perfessional :P

Jen
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Wow! your a great poet!
XoOx molly

Very touching poem, excellent ending. Nice flow

Mystifying ending... i hate child abuse... it's a sad thing that i wish would die... child abuse is never right!

thanks for the comment ;) i get lots of poems from people who can't believe i'm so young. it's just that if you know something, it doesn't matter how old you are because you know something important. :) i'm glad to be a poet though. im glad u r too ;)

have fun.

That was very good, but it made me sad... I liked it a lot, keep it up, hun.

Ravyn

Sorry it tooks so long but congrats on third i love this poem. It is so sad but wonderfuly written excellent job!

I really like the message behind this poe, it is really good!

Hey, well done, good poem 5/5
~She Died Screaming

Very well written. i love the imagery. and the wording gave just the right picture into my mind.. i could see everything i read. well done