I liked this, the moral, detail, structure etc, but have one query i think the title lets it down a little. Maybe if you called it 'The Bi-Polar curse' or something it might be bit better, just my opinion here, however the poem itself was great

Sondos

Wow, this is great. I personally like the title, but that's my opinion as well. Please check out my 2 poems and if you care to, please comment.

That is amazing, just one question.. in the last stanza first sentence is it supposed to be 'Though' or 'Through' ?

I like how you use the yo-yo imagery, thats really good. I never associated a yo-yo with happy or sad, but now that I've read your poem I do =P

Great great write, 5/5

Wow.. that was very good! i enjoyed that imensely! the only mistake i could find in the whole poem is here ::

Like a yo-yo though highs and lows
^ i think you meant to write (through) not (though) hehe.. keep up the excellent work! 5/5 i love your poetry!

This is a great poem! I really liked it...even though i don't know much about being bi-polar. It was great

It was pretty good, especially when informing people with what it's like to be bi-polar. The imagery of a yo-yo was pretty good too with mood movements.

Amazing poem! i could actually imagine a yo-yo i really liked it! 5/5 keep up the good work!
x!x

WOW!!!!!! it flowed so well and i know how it feels to feel so high and then so low... my best friends mom is bi polar and i have chronic depression... and well, today is a good day!!! anyways i really really loved this poem and you definately earned a 5/5 -Jen-

I am familiar with bi polar just simply because I did a project on it at college. You're right it is a lot more complicated than this, but you did well to simplify it. It's a great informative poem. I liked how you described it as a "yo-yo" I think that's very true. On the last line of the fourth stanza, it should be "your."
Well done!

Hey
thanks for the comment on my peom, it was much appreciated, and yeh it is true or should i say it was true so that's good. i really like ur poems to, i can understand that u simplfied this poem as it is difficult to explain. i have a mood disorder there not sure if it's bipolar, some doctors think it is others don't, wot i do no is its very hard to describe and u did a good job. best of luck for future poems, keep it touch
edwina
xoxo

=^-^= Very nice, and i can understand why you simplified it. Emotion is a very hard thing to explain. It's so complex and hard to make vivid for the reader. But i love this peice, you keep it up hun. take care

I love this poem. I understand clearly what you mean. The flow and rythym was perfect. Bi-Polar is a very hard thing to deal with. Your poem is perfect, I adore it.
Akina♥

Although I honestly don't know too much about this topic, the poem gave me a pretty good feel for it. The imagery was awesome as many people mentionned, and it flowed rather smoothly. It was slightly different in the last stanza, but it worked out. Great job.

Actually you did a very nice job explaining it! You could have gone more indepth about your feelings... but other than that you did a wonderful job! The flow was nice as well as your wording! This line

Fearing the worse

Should have worest but i understand you were trying to rhyme with curse. :) nice job 10/5

Much love
Brigitte

W.O.W

This was really good. And ooh. Those first two lines are in one of my poems. :/ Hmm. Anywho, Really great job on expressing this. You did a great job. I can really understand Bi-Polar now. =D 5/5 Keep it up.

`taleee xx

W O W This poem is sooo good, better then anything i have ever wrote, u did a great job explaining it, I loved it, it was sooooo good, I'm just kinda speechless all i can say is great job and 5/5 from me.
always jennifer

I know what that feels like the critazism for having it
never know what ever day is going to feel like

great work

Wow i really enjoyed it such depth and truth you have such talent it is amazing!
keep the talent keep the faith and keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

Again, great job...are you bipolar? Im sorry if you are, its not the easiest thing to live with:(

I really loved this poem, mostly because i'm bipolar. I found out about two years ago. It runs in my family. I loved how you wrote the poem so that it was easy for other people to understand what you are talking about. I know from personal experience that it is really hard to explain to someone exactly what bipolar is. Great job with the poem!