Great poem...it gives many feelings to the reader...and i loved to read it
By the way...thnks a lot 4 all ur comments on my poems ;)

Really a nice poem... Just loved it!

Its really an beautiful poem, burning desire for love could be felt in each and every word, this poem of urs carries wind of love with it, moment u read it...u r blown away.
beautiful poem and very diff from ur complete collection so far.

all the best and take care

Awwww this is just cute!!!
lol, yeeh we hv almost same tittles!
anyway your poem was truly amazing and wonderfully written!
I love readin every poem that u write they put a smile on my face
you're truly an amazing writer!
keep up this talent
Luv
NemO xxxxxxxx

Love at first sight Does happen....happened to me...
Many years and still together.....careful carefu.....
and all the Best.....l

Hey darl a tOuching piece. very heartfelt lot of emOtion. great jOb keep it up

Girl, I can totally relate to this! You're falling for him, and you don't even know him...and when you fall, you fall hard. This exact thing happened to me. You yearn for him to look at you just once more, but at the same time, you don't want him to cuz you know it's gonna hurt (i don't know if that's what was in the poem, but that's how i felt when it happened to me :) ) Wonderful poem, I loved all of it!!!! You are a fantastic writer...you are in my faves!!! ;) Keep up the good work, and thanks for the comment on my poem! Much love, Ashley

What a beautiful penned you've potray here, so breathtaking poem yet beautiful ended, awesome! i iwsh you have a great day, take care.

bert.

Nicely written, keep up the good work :]

Not my type of poem style but still really good. Don't change if that is what you like.

Whow that was sooo good, i Loved it!!
You're an excellent writer
Xx keep it up

Another brilliant poem, I have read by you, well done,

dave x

It's been a while since I read your poems Michelle. And this was very refreshing indeed.

well done, girl!

shobhana

This is a great poem!

Wow... thats all i have to say is wow... that was a great poem. your writeing is amazing

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM AND I CAN RELATE TO IT, IS THIS TURE AND HAPPEND TO YOU?

Wow, What a great poem.. Very well written
Can you comment mine in return, thank you

Hehe this gives me butterflies!! i fully know this feeling hunny. keep writing, ur great :)
luv dani xx

Very nicely penned Michelle, I like this, great job!!!

Lool am afraid u fall so deep where no one can save well this poem added anew taste to your wiritng. a good shot

love and sorry for my later comment