by Jessica May 21, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
As the meandering stream |
by Jenna Balkin
Great ending! |
by Natalie
This was awesome. Sounded so pretty tehe. The last stanza was brillant. A really great poem here. Keep it up. 5/5 |
by N J Thornton
Ooh beautiful descriptions and impressive use of adjectives. I liked how you described the water best, I could hear it trickling by. A good nature write, well done. |
Glad to read a great poem that doesnt bring a tear to my eye ....good wrok keep it up ... espeically the ones like this its great .... |
Hey this is really an amazing piece of art, i just liked it all the way, lot of thinking is been behind every single word here & the beauty has been potrayed beautifully |