Hey this is really an amazing piece of art, i just liked it all the way, lot of thinking is been behind every single word here & the beauty has been potrayed beautifully

all the best and take care
5/5

Glad to read a great poem that doesnt bring a tear to my eye ....good wrok keep it up ... espeically the ones like this its great ....

XoX *~CrImSon__TeArS~*

Ooh beautiful descriptions and impressive use of adjectives. I liked how you described the water best, I could hear it trickling by. A good nature write, well done.

This was awesome. Sounded so pretty tehe. The last stanza was brillant. A really great poem here. Keep it up. 5/5

`taleee xx

Great ending!
I really love this poem! It gave me goosebump!!
*thumbs up!*

Jen

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