Comments : 3 years

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    In the Second stanza i think you meant "It keeps me down to earth"
    other then that i find no more flaws in this poem... its perfect... i love the flow.. the way you put it all together..."The first bit of pain wasn't enough
    so from me you began to pour" That line was brilliant!!!! i can definately relate to this and see where your coming from 5/5 -Jen-