by Raychil May 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She hasn't eaten in 2 days |
by Tammy
Very sad but awesome write. You did a wonderful job on this one..keep it up :) |
Fantastic. very honest! thanks for commenting on my poem! check out some more if you have time. thanks, amy xox |
by Chelsey
Awww this just broke my heart :(...I too know of someone like this and it brings tears to my eyes...Loved that last stanza it brings a positive into a negative poem! I enjoy the way you write, its kinda like how I write! Terrfic job on this and best wishes to this little girl! |
by XxTeArSxX17
Wow this was amazing you did a great job it was sad but not at the same time if you get what i mean. keep up the amazing work 5.5 |
by Zoe
This poem is great! i love it! 5/5 keep it up! |