One Young Girl's Life

by Raychil   May 21, 2006


She hasn't eaten in 2 days
Her dad ran out of cash
They just had to move again
Into an apartment full of trash

She's desperately trying to keep moving
But she feels so drained
Even though she's still young
A semi-depression is obtained

Her dad has to work double-time
She's left at home with her brother
This isn't right, she's only eight!
She can't take responsibility as his mother

Her dad's new girlfriend does nothing
She just yells and sits around
The girl doesn't make eye contact
She just stares at the ground

Her real mom is in the hospital
Her memory is slowly returning
She watches her mom in pity
Because of everything she's re-leaning

The girl sits in her room
Listening to her stomach cry
She watches her brother happily play
Causing a tear in her eye

Thats one thing she has going
The brother who makes her smile
With his laughing innocence
It makes her life still worth-while

*This is based on a true story of a little girl I know..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tammy

    Very sad but awesome write. You did a wonderful job on this one..keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    Fantastic. very honest! thanks for commenting on my poem! check out some more if you have time. thanks, amy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awww this just broke my heart :(...I too know of someone like this and it brings tears to my eyes...Loved that last stanza it brings a positive into a negative poem! I enjoy the way you write, its kinda like how I write! Terrfic job on this and best wishes to this little girl!
    Chelsey-Lynn

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Wow this was amazing you did a great job it was sad but not at the same time if you get what i mean. keep up the amazing work 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Zoe

    This poem is great! i love it! 5/5 keep it up!