This poem is great! i love it! 5/5 keep it up!

Wow this was amazing you did a great job it was sad but not at the same time if you get what i mean. keep up the amazing work 5.5

Awww this just broke my heart :(...I too know of someone like this and it brings tears to my eyes...Loved that last stanza it brings a positive into a negative poem! I enjoy the way you write, its kinda like how I write! Terrfic job on this and best wishes to this little girl!
Chelsey-Lynn

Fantastic. very honest! thanks for commenting on my poem! check out some more if you have time. thanks, amy xox

Very sad but awesome write. You did a wonderful job on this one..keep it up :)