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by Amber May 21, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Tears of sorrow With dreams of tomorrow And all else fades away Darkened rainbows And the devil's halos Cloud my sunny day Rain of sadness And a lack of gladness As I slowly slip away Blade of silver Just one small sliver Now I feel no pain
by Natalie
Very short. But good. I liked it. Flow and rhyming were good. Fav lines; "Tears of sorrow With dreams of tomorrow And all else fades away" I l-o-v-e-d that part. Awesome job! 5/5 `taleee xx
by Zoe
Great poem i loved it! 5/5 keep it up!