Nice. It sort of reminds me of my writing except with a wider range of vocab. lol. I love it.

Woah... Deep, beautifully written and filled with perfect illustrations. My fav line; For only in the darkness can one see the stars... Blew me away. What a perfect ending to a perfectly written poem! I shall go and ponder now :)

Kim, I love this poem; especially the line at the end "For only in the darkness can one see the stars".
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

Wow, amazing poem. 5/5. One part that just blew me away, was of course, the ending.

"For only in the darkness can one see the stars"

Great Job

5/5
Bryce

'For only in the darkness can one see the stars'

I do agree, that is an awesome line!!
You are a really talented writer and i love this poem!!

Jen

The word choice in this was great aswell. But, The flow seemed abit rocky.. It was still a great poem though. I liked the last stanza alot too. speshly this line: "The shadows dance through the leaves to death's music" =) Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.