I love poems in this Format..When it rhymes..lol
This poem was still good
Deeply Expressed and detailed
with the 30 seconds seeming forever
Great job
I liked it
5/5
~MF~

To tell the truth, I didnt get the meaning of your poem...
I dunno why maybe its something In ME or maybe I didn't focus that much!
I know I like the poem somehow, it ain't that bad that I even gave it a 5 =D lol, the simple way you wrote it with, made it sweet actually!

Maybe YOU are the one who will be able to get it because you are the one who wrote it !
Good Luck With The Comings!
T.C
NemO x0x0x0x0

Thanks for your sweet comment =) meant alot! xxx