I think this is a really good touching poem but i think you could improve it by just cheking your format again. its great anyway the words the feeling u put in. you must be a great friend to have. 5/5

That's nice. I can tell you really had chemistry between you two. I liked it. 5/5
-Vino

This is cute. I'm sure everyone on this site can relate to a friend like this, i know i sure can. You really show your feelings through your words, and you do it well.