With or without you... I'm ok

by Wishing4perfect   May 21, 2006


Good-bye sweetie,
i gave you my best
i gave you my all.
you fall back to ur old ways
and i'll find better along the way.
don't worry about me.
trust me i'm doing ok.
i've finally found myself
i've finally found hope
and i thank you
for introducing me
to this brand new world.
it's not so bad on my own,
and i always find comfort
in the ones who are there.
but since you've been gone
you've just become a lie
that my heart no longer believes.

i wrote this really fast... so it's not that good! but comment and rate and i'll return the favor!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    It may have been quick, but I like. Sometimes quick writings have the best emotion of all. I can definitely sympathize w/ what ur feeling!

  • Heart breaks only make u stronger . good poem . check out mine they are short and simple i usually just think of them while im driving or right before bed