Series of Deaths

by Wasted Fake Smiles   May 21, 2006


This is the story, of an un-noticed girl,
No one heard her voice, no one cared in the world.
No one saw her tears, but no one really cared,
No one saw that for death, she was fully prepared.

It started as a child; her dad was always drunk,
Her mom was too, and their house was junk.
The father beat the girl, and the mom just stood and watched,
The girl got picked on at school, because she was bruised splotched.

One night when she was just fifteen and a half,
He was so high that he tripped and laughed.
He turned to her mom, and pulled out a gun,
Said "I hate you", pulled the trigger, and her life was done.

Next he turned to the girl, and said, "You're such a waste"
She looked at him, and spit on his face.
He dropped the gun, and she picked it up,
Pointed at him, she said "shut-up!"

"I'm sick of you dad, you always are so mad,
Not my fault what you and mom did, but I'm glad!
I'm glad I'm alive, especially now that you'll die,
We won't have a funeral, and no one will cry.

I did nothing to you, but you always beat me,
But I ain'?t little anymore, can't you see?
I can stick up for myself, and dad, I hate you,
I'm glad to kill you, now you're life is through!"

She pulled the trigger on him, and then to her head,
Pulled the trigger a last time, and was also dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Russell

    Damn..That was really sad.I'm kinda speachless..that was great..never once did you loose my focus on the poem..That shows you have a LOT of talent.It was really a pleasure to read this.5/5

    much love,
    -Russell-

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Hi. this was awesome... sadistic, but i liked it :)

    im a runner up for your point system contest. (yay)

    Can u please r/r/c on
    1)Child of Youth,
    2)Pop in another pill, take another drink,
    and 3)When I'm alone
    ? thank you :)

    once again, this a chilling but beautiful poem =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    This is a little bit scary to me but it was really easy to imagine!! Keep writing well.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Damn this is just so sad but u made it so easy to picture the complete poem as a running fiction in front of reader's eyes, beautifully written piece.

    all the best and take care
    5/5