by Wasted Fake Smiles May 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This is the story, of an un-noticed girl, |
by Russell
Damn..That was really sad.I'm kinda speachless..that was great..never once did you loose my focus on the poem..That shows you have a LOT of talent.It was really a pleasure to read this.5/5 |
Hi. this was awesome... sadistic, but i liked it :) |
by Ye Seul
This is a little bit scary to me but it was really easy to imagine!! Keep writing well. |
Damn this is just so sad but u made it so easy to picture the complete poem as a running fiction in front of reader's eyes, beautifully written piece. |