Damn this is just so sad but u made it so easy to picture the complete poem as a running fiction in front of reader's eyes, beautifully written piece.

all the best and take care
5/5

This is a little bit scary to me but it was really easy to imagine!! Keep writing well.

Hi. this was awesome... sadistic, but i liked it :)

im a runner up for your point system contest. (yay)

Can u please r/r/c on
1)Child of Youth,
2)Pop in another pill, take another drink,
and 3)When I'm alone
? thank you :)

once again, this a chilling but beautiful poem =)

Damn..That was really sad.I'm kinda speachless..that was great..never once did you loose my focus on the poem..That shows you have a LOT of talent.It was really a pleasure to read this.5/5

much love,
-Russell-