This ones for you; dad

by e LIZ a beth   May 22, 2006


&&this is where it ends..

for every time i said "i love you"
for the times you ignored every word
for all the times i tried to make it better
and the times you made it worse
this is for all the things i did wrong
and all that i didnt do right
cuz in your eyes im one big failure
listen just one last time
this is for you not caring
and this is for my heart
this is showing you how i feel
and how you tore me apart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    Amazing, well done, i am adding you to my favorites and will proably read more as you write. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was a very strong poem about your father. I myself have written a poem about my father, and i can relate to yours. wonderful poem, good job. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Ii dont think i ever read this one.. or if i did i forgot.. lol its really really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda?!

    I told you this before, i really love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Very cute.. i likies! lol =]P

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