hey,
I know how you feel.
But sorry to say this but this poem sucks.

This poem has a lot of emotion in it. I loved it. I definalty know what you are going through, and it sucks let me tell ya! That pain seems to never go away no matter what you do, but hang in there, cuz it gets better days at a time.

hey mara this was a great poem i loved it .... i write very similiar things as this, so i can totatly relate .... even though i say death brings us peace, but when i deeply think about it, its not really the only way out ..... there are many things good in life and there are many people out there that care, so why would u leave this world just for one person, and hurt many people ??? u know what i mean? awsome poem :)