Our Love

by Ashlie   May 22, 2006


Love is your touch
Love is your smile
The way you look at me
The way you make my heart go wild
From your brown hair
To your dark brown eyes
It's made up of your gentle warmth
Not of deceit and lies
When you told me you had other dates
I figured that it was over
But then I realized what love was
Trust, forgiveness, and most of all loving each other
You fill my heart
Your love is the key
Our love is the love
That everyone longs for and needs

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  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Hi Ashlie,
    Thank you for all your comments, You sound like a very lovely and talented girl!!
    Your poems are great, Mine aren't too good at the moment, My motto is, They are not good enough until you are a famous poet! Every one that I write I say to myself the next one will be better! And hopfully they'll get better and better ! Keep up the good work ashlie, Your lovely:)
    Danielle
    oxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by teryn

    You commented my poem..so i had to comment yours. i like this one. it is very good. you are a good writer!!