Your Lies Fuel My Suicide

by Raychel   May 22, 2006


In the blink of an eye,
i chose to die,
with every single lie,
i commit suicide.

you tell me that u love me,
but now i know how to see,
every time u lie my soul is being set free,
and the way u lie is saving me.

from a life of pain,
of bleeding in the rain,
from going totally insane,
and living a life of pain.

so may i thank u,
for doing what u do,
and killing me in little bits,
instead of killing me in direct hits.

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  • 18 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    I have never really heard any peom quite like this one
    i am glad that the last stanza boke the rhyme scheme because it wouldnt have had the impact it did if you tried to have it all rhyme

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    This is an amazing poem and im glad i found it... grrt job..hang in there ray!
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlie

    Hey well this is a good poem. im sorry bout your b/f. if u need someone to talk to im here.