Raw Passion

by Shaylee   May 22, 2006


How is it that the passionate hearts of lovers,
mimick the roaring of the seas, the crashing of each wave
The glorious sight of a sunset
with erotic reds and yellow lust
reflecting life and helpless lovers
which every instinct craves
in life, as in love, each as passionate
each as sacred
Ones holy and untouchable, indestructable
desire of emotions
When beings lust for the raw feelings
of the wild
Uncivilised you say, but of true and fresh passion
Elements of our sex, our love
Our most human of devotions

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Vivid! Great word usage, and I love the fact that you don't tie yourself down to rhyming to try to pull this off - so many people do, and sometimes forcing a rhyme can ruin a perfectly good poem. You have some great imagery here, I love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Really beautiful. i likes teh reference to the sunste and lust. it's really sweet & kool. well done! rock on.

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I love the metaphor in this! Its amazing-all the descriptions were so detailed. Great write-perfect-absolutely perfect---5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    Wow!! This is the 2nd poem of yours I've read!! I really enjoy your work!! I love how you related lovers heart to beautiful things in nature!! A definite 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Shaylee --
    Now, this was great! I really loved it! It expressed a lot of emotion which works really well in love poems. Great job hun!! Keep it up ;; you`re doing GREAT!!
    5/5

    **Samantha Hollywood

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