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  • 18 years ago

    by cYc

    I LOVE THIS!!!!!! I like the way you start your 1st stanza using the wind then on your last stanza you use the same thing but in a very different way... you being the wind itself! That one really touch my heart!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shawna

    I liked your other poems so much I decided to check them all out!! Once again, very great poem!! I hope you aren't truly feeling suicidal though!! I love how you incorporate animals and nature into your poems!! Great Job! 5/5