Engulfed in Pain

*This doesn't rhyme, but please comment so i know what you think, plz be honest coz i can take constructive criticism, i promise i will return the favor*

crimson blood, rippling down
no fear of death, more fear of life

the untold truths, pouring openly from her soul

no love to fill her lonely life
the lies engulf her,

the flames can only skim across her body
no soul left in side of her