Ooooh yes. very very nicely written. heaps of raw emotion. i love it!
-Suz
p.s. smile!!

Very very good. I love your poems, and I love the fact you took your sweet time to comment on like...half of my many poems! lmfao, you have no idea how much i appreciated reading all them. It makes you smile thinking somebody actually took time to write on your poems, whether it be praises of excellence or complains that you suck! lol, but your work is so amazing it makes people jelous. I know it makes me jelous! And though you have many less poems than me, I'm sure that with one, of your poems, you could easily over-rule all of mine. So I thank god for putting such a talented young writer on earth! Good luck in more amazing writes! Be happy my friend. :)

I really love this poem. It goes with everything I believe about religion. Its
such a farse! Well done! I love it!
:D

Bravo. Ur a great poet. And I thnk you know what's going on in the world around you, and it makes your poetry raw. God job.

RLS

WOW... You are a great poet, and this was awesome. keep writing, you have talent! 5/5

-Allanah Rayne

MANSON IS GOD

Dude, that rocked! i hate how everyone's about media and looking good for the sake of image and social status, it's like, WTF!!!!
this poem rates top of my charts. i think u'd enjoy the only poem i've written so far "frayed truth". it seems like you'd be the kind of guy to agree with what i'm trying to say.

Rock on!!!
-you cannot sedate all the things you hate

I know this isn't a comemnt, lol. Yes i do listen to and find myself liking HIM. i also enjoy system of a down and Pucifer. ttys!
-Brian

-A rebel from the waist down

You know, it's a real shame we had a falling out when... Alot of the time we think alike.
I congradulate you on the fine works of poetry you have done so far.
I also ask for a truce and new beginnings. Forgive and forget

Sincerley,
Grotesque

Wow. This really shows the true side of things

Amazing poem. I write about the pretense of religion too, but in a more subtle way, not as bold as you. I like this style though, its great.