With my love [Lyrics]

by Mark   May 22, 2006


[Verse 1]
I think about those dreadful days,
Those days I never liked,
The days that were bad,
The days I wish I never had.

[Verse 2]
To be treated fair,
With tender love,
You were never there,
It seems you didn't care,
About the things I couldn't bare.

[Chorus]
Do you love me, as I love you,
My new life to be,
My dreams being set free,
I can not be stopped,
I will always care,
With my love, still there.

[Verse 3]
I never want to say the words, goodbye,
Just let them fly,
Fly far away,
Out of my life and out of my way.

[Chorus]
Do you love me, as I love you,
My new life to be,
My dreams being set free,
I can not be stopped,
I will always care,
With my love, still there.

[Verse 4]
That only one,
That brings you fun,
The one you can't stand to bare.
That only one,
With out the gun,
The only one that will care.

[Verse 5]
I wanna to be the one,
That one for you,
To try and get through.. together.
I want to be together with you.. forever.

[Chorus]
Do you love me, as I love you,
My new life to be,
My dreams being set free,
I can not be stopped,
I will always care,
With my love, still there.

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This was my first ever song..
So please rate on how I did, please.

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  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    Hey i write songs as well, and i can definitely see this one being awesome with music! being a lyric and not a poem, it doesnt have the same... i dunno what the word is, 'effect' i guess on the reader, but it's still cool and it would be a really cute song! write more lyrics!!!!

    Em@->-

  • 18 years ago

    by :::HOPE:::

    I really like that song! im blown away no joke i really liked it!

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    [Verse 5]
    I wanna to be the one,
    That one for you,
    To try and get through.. together.
    I want to be together with you.. forever.
    ^^
    this verse was really good. i would def buy this sng if it was released!! great job hun!!!
    speak to ys soon hopefully!!!
    love ya love jes!!!!!!!!!!!
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