Amazing poem hun! OMG I really love it...ur tittles are captivating, really!
you're a wonderful writer
I luved reading this poem its truly written and the words are meaningful!

about my poem,no it isn't true, I am with my boyfriend already but the idea itself crossed my mind

keep it up brilliant writer ;)
Always Waiting for more!
Best Of Luck
NemO xxxxxxxxxx

Wow! absolutely wonderful! u write amazing love poems yaar......i love it.
i wonder y u wer into dark poems wen i came to know abt u? is it effect of mine???????:0)

well really glad to read ur poems specially love poems......

luv,
Bharti

Hmmm... hiding your darkness behind the name of love poems... lol... pretty smart. But great poem thought. You wrote it so honestly, straight from the heart. Its sad how feelings fade away. Ultimate piece. Keep them coming.

Love
Michelle

I think this poem is one of your best. keep up the good work!!!!!:)

I really love reading your poems, Sorry I dont comment on them more, but everyone seems to some up what I have to say and I dont want to sound like I am trying to say what other people are writing. I get inspired reading your poems and when you left a comment it made me want to right more. So thank you and take care

dave

That was great i lOved it. beautifully written. a very tOuching piece!!! lOt of emOtion in this pOem. keep em coming!!!

I really like ur words in the last verse its really prettiful xox me

But as the time passes through these unforgettable scars
i am sure of the time when our love would shine like stars

so allow me to play with your shadow
as your soul couldn't see me anymore
and let my still heart rest on your feets
as only you could make it beat like before

wow
this got me in tears man...5/5
i really loved the words and the ending was fantastic....this is the most shortest amazing poem eva!!
:)

sonam

Lovely title, lovely all the way.

great writing!
shobhana

This is a beautiful poem! You chose your words so well and it's just so captivating. You did a great job on this. I loved it!

Wow really sad poem but so amazing

This peopm is amazingg

U keep amazing me by the variety and the themes u choose with such talent

all the best

As I read your poems. The more I read the more meaning I am seeing in each one. The feelings of love you portray are very strong. This is so beautiful. What love you have to give. Excellent. Take Care Your Friend Cindy