Morning Drive

by Laura   May 22, 2006


I drive east into the rising sun
in the morning on my way to work
Leaving the security of my small town
to go into the city where dangers lurk

Speeding down a long stretch of highway
listening to the traffic report
For if there is an accident my primary route
I will have to quickly abort

As the bright glow of the sun
gets higher and higher in the sky
The forecasted temperature
has already reached the peak high

After almost a complete hour later
I have finally reached my destination
My workday has not even commenced
and I already feel like I need a vacation

Written for a CC&P challenge

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  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    A very...different kind of poem. It feels more like a miscellaneous poem. Great flow and great order of words

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very good job again. I liked the 3rd stanza alot.

    And I can imagine wanting a vacation before work has even started, just from sitting in traffic. That would bug me tehe. Very nicely done again though, I'm enjoying your poems! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Summer

    Hehehe, I like this one. I cant really explain why, but its different ;) great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Well written piece, simple and real!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Haha, the winner's poem. It was truely a great read. I think I voted for you too :)

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