When you sent this to me, I was impressed. You met this challenge well. I really enjoyed this one, so inviting :)

Sitting in my office as I read this, so obviously Im hard at work - NOT I love when my boss is out I can catch up on everyones poems :o) Laura anyone who has to face the fact of working each and almost everyday of the week can relate to this poem, its really well written full of truth and to me is just raw and real with great appeal. Good work hun!
Eirisa

I like the poem goes to the heart of a simple drive to work. The drive can be so exhausting and now you have to actually do some work. Wonderful poem!

Haha, the winner's poem. It was truely a great read. I think I voted for you too :)

Well written piece, simple and real!

Hehehe, I like this one. I cant really explain why, but its different ;) great job

Very good job again. I liked the 3rd stanza alot.

And I can imagine wanting a vacation before work has even started, just from sitting in traffic. That would bug me tehe. Very nicely done again though, I'm enjoying your poems! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

A very...different kind of poem. It feels more like a miscellaneous poem. Great flow and great order of words