I absolutely love ths, you have an amazing talent, please please do not give up on it, i absolutely loved this like

As my nightmares eat my dreams

really nice imagery

beautiful

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Whoaaaaaa!!!! You amaze me. Another classic right herreeee!! And yeah..that rape story was true, Sarah...just recently, my ex tried to rape me. : (....i'm hanging in there though. I'm tough like that, lol!!

But anyways, I LOVED this verse!
I clutch my chest with plenty blood
Yet the pain makes me feel whole
The tears they fall and freeze in air
As the devil bargains for my soul

loved it!

Great peice, very well written with some very powerful lines contained within a wonderfully written peice

Your a poet prodigy =P... im definately adding you to my favorites... this was another amazing poem by you... your so talented i wish i could write as good as you. all your poems blow me away... always keep writing :D -Jen- 5/5

Wow. I think this is one of my favorites. I really enjoyed it, it was so, I can't explain it. But it was as if this was happening before my eyes.