A river of my shattered core

by Mrs Reynolds- far from fixed   May 22, 2006


Traveling this path, alone
Tears fall from my weary eyes
I need the next direction to be shown
But I cannot see through this web of lies

You hold a hand out
Cant reach through the protective walls I built
Things I think fall into my mouth making me shout
You hurt me; but its me that feels guilt.

Its me thats left unsatisfied
Dont shut me out, I need a guide
I want to be attached to you, dont set me free
My tears weigh me down and drown me.

Each tear takes a little part of me and it will pour
Into a stream, a river of bits of my shattered core.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    I cannot see through this fog of lies while I cannot be freed of this web of lies. Good writing though it needs a little work.

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Incredible write. This is emotional, and very well put together. Well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow you have some serious talent. I loved this poem. B

    eautifully written, great choice of words, and a fantastic flow.. which makes it; excellent!

    Very well done =)

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I really liked this poem. great job keep it up... 5/5
    chek out my poems sometime

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