Wish i could save you

by trepidation   May 22, 2006


I wish i could save you
from the mess your in
i wish i could be there
under your skin
to keep you from the mistake
your blindly stumbling in

wish the problems you have
and the decisions you have made
to my influence entirely pushed away
for i don't handle this impact
forced on you as i wish to help you
relieve your emotions as i embrace
them with open arms

i wish i could save you
from the mess your in
i wish i could be there
under your skin
to keep you from the mistake
your blindly stumbling in

hearkened to the need
for you to talk
i see revulsion in your actions
no longer the need for me
cleft and repel me away
as i fall you push me down

submerged in the regret
i feel for letting you down
thoughts of triviality i feel for myself
i realize i can't save you

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  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Thats a really nice poem

    well done

    dave x

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Melanie~

    This is really, really good! It's something I can relate 2.
    Alway'z, Melanie 5-22-06'

  • 18 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    Hey. this is pretty good, was it meant to be a song? you could make a lot of money writing lyrics for people. good job, keep writing. peace.

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