Comments : Wish i could save you

  • 18 years ago

    by ENTROPY

    Hey. this is pretty good, was it meant to be a song? you could make a lot of money writing lyrics for people. good job, keep writing. peace.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Melanie~

    This is really, really good! It's something I can relate 2.
    Alway'z, Melanie 5-22-06'

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Thats a really nice poem

    well done

    dave x