by The Angel of Secrets May 22, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
This awful man, so full of hate, |
by LadyPearl
Very forceful poem. How dare a man calls himself a man if he abuses a woman. lol...nice job^-^ |
by Jessica
Wow! that just took my breath away.. it was so powerful and so sad.. the emotions were oozing out and the flow was pretty good! there were just a few errors with grammer but you can always fix those! great job! 5/5 |
by Jenna Balkin
Aww..thats so sad/depressing..I like the rhymes..so creative..and it's sad to know that some woment really are put in a position like that... |
by Lisa
Wow this is such a shocking poem....its sad to know that things like this do go on in the world this was my favourite stanza: |
Gr8 work that was so gr8...lotta details..lovd it congrats on gettin 2nd ruyner up on my contest...5/5 |