Hmm! lol that was very different. I'm not sure if I got it correctly! lol i hope i did! but i loved the rhythm of it. fantastic! keep it up! :D

Great peice the altering structure adds interest and the content is very clear making for a great peice of poetry

It's unquie, like you!
That's what makes it so amazing.
Loved it!
Lovce you. xx
-Heater