A very nicely wirtten war poem. the fatehres words where what spoke to me the most, and, as usual, your imagry was specktacualr. i thoight that teh idea of the lovly casket being coverd in earth being a metaaphore for the soldiers life being wasted.

Ruby

Wow... it gae me chills... i was reading it and i just turned cold... that is something i am thinking about... no one wants me to though.... but that pome is so touching... it's like i was there as he was be laid to rest...

Wow So Talented Megan.

Love MKKA!

Ur poem was great! i like alot of ur poems. i just hope i can write that good someday. keep up the AWESOME work!

Ur poem was great! i like alot of ur poems. i just hope i can write that good someday. keep up the AWESOME work!