Wow, really wonderful, it left me with this really strange fealling, strange but good,
keep it up mel

This freakin ROX!! i love it! every stanza is powerful, and i LOVE IT!!! keep it up!

WOW is all i can say. Very powerful and i know that feeling too.

Awww.. that is really sad.. I'm sorry that this happened to you. You did a great job at expressing your emotions on this and you put in some wonderful imagery.. Great job .

Thanks for the comments