This shows my life

Eyes open, lights up
the shows about to start
pick up the plec pick up the guitar
and make a start

the adrenalins pumping
and so\'s my heart
the fans are screaming
so i make my mark

secretly they know nothing
of what i truely know
to them its just another
kick ass show

if they saw my eyes
they\'d see the pain
the same stuff that drives me insain

the alcohol consumed
is taking effect
i put this noose around my neck
i can hear the fans

there screaming my god forsaken name

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