Ashes of life

by teagan   May 22, 2006


What would happen
if you were to instantly go away
who would i have?

to have to...
play with
talk with
argue with
cry with

i would feel so dead
like a mom that lost a child

don\'t ever leave me ash! luv you.
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  • 18 years ago

    by CoLliN

    It really says how you feel...
    keep up the good work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by miss4re

    I like this 1, i dont think you need the fourth line tho, try move it round a bit ok, keep it up hun