Stop SAying "It'll all be okay"

by LockedInEternity   May 22, 2006


If I look upset, then I probably am.
So why in the world would you question?
And then you pretend that you give a damn.
So you give me your stupid suggestion.

The same words come out of your mouth day by day.
And I'm tired of hearing your shit.
Stop f u c k i n g saying "It'll all be okay"
I'm losing it all bit by bit.

I mean, if you actually cared, that's alright,
But I know that you don't when you say
"Hey you'll be fine; you know that I'm right"
"And trust me, it'll all be okay"

When will you realize, that you're f u c k i n g wrong?
That I won't be okay, that I ache.
You lie through clenched teeth like a sappy love song,
I know that your sympathy's FAKE.

So just stop pretending to know what it's like,
Cause unless you actually do,
Take all your lies and go for a hike.
You have no idea, what I'm going through.

So if I look upset, then I probably am.
Don't bother asking that question.
And stop pretending that you give a damn,
I DON'T WANT YOUR STUPID SUGGESTION!

*Yeah, i know its a bit messed up..but i was a kindof pissed off at the moment:)..so plz comment and vote:)..Just curious what u think of it*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Well in this poem you did sound pissed off! and well to me... using "s h i t" or "f u c k i n", never makes a poem nice, but in ur poem it flowed together with the whole poem! cos you did put them in the right place

    Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Love it love it love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    I think this poem has better potential..........I myself have tried to get these words out in a poem but have failed, now I think that you have gotten a lot farther then me but I think it could be a bit better........better flow and structure.

    -AnnMarie

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    I like it. There is so much anger in pain in it I can really understand how you feel. Just a couple of things...
    I think it should be in the explicit/profanity section because of the swearing. And the line
    "Or you won't be able to sit" just doesn't seem to fit in... The rhyme seems forced there.
    Good poem though, I like it! 5/5
    - Polly

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Well hey, I liked it anyways.. And I'm not really sure what else to say about... Sorry. =(

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5