by LockedInEternity May 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
If I look upset, then I probably am. |
by Robie Lincer
Well in this poem you did sound pissed off! and well to me... using "s h i t" or "f u c k i n", never makes a poem nice, but in ur poem it flowed together with the whole poem! cos you did put them in the right place |
by Jenni Marie
Love it love it love it! |
by AnnMarie
I think this poem has better potential..........I myself have tried to get these words out in a poem but have failed, now I think that you have gotten a lot farther then me but I think it could be a bit better........better flow and structure. |
by Polly
I like it. There is so much anger in pain in it I can really understand how you feel. Just a couple of things... |
Well hey, I liked it anyways.. And I'm not really sure what else to say about... Sorry. =( |