My promise

by Alexia   May 22, 2006


\"i love you\" is my promise
not broken to this day
but you chose the other path
and threw it all away

we laughed at eachother,
fought, made up, then kissed
we jocked about our future
closed our eyes and reminissed

my tears were yours
you made them dissapear
it felt so right there was no sign to tell
that the end would soon be near

I care so much about you
i though you felt the same
somehow you proved me wrong
now i\'m feeling so much pain

remember if you ever feel lonely
doing something you\'d never dared
listen up and you\'ll hear my whisper,
\"I love you, dont be scared.\"

even with the time that\'s passed
i still think of you every day
you\'re face is with me in my soul
i\'ll never throw our memories away

But now i lie here in the dark
listening to the falling rain
i close my eyes and wish you back
knowing it\'s all in vain.

i dont think it flows very well but theres jsut a lot of different thoughts that i had to get out. comment and rate please

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  • 18 years ago

    by Briana

    Wow,that was really really good..some poepl just seen to have the same story as me. luvses, later.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    It does flow smoothly. You get an A in that, lol. But i8n grammer... you get a C-

    You need to capitalize the beginning of your lines.

    And, I can't stress this enough, CAPITALIZE YOUR FREAKIN' I'S!