Beautifully deep, strong and poetic Kim...unique and subtle yet full of fear and desperation in your words...great write.

Excellent poem Kim! I love the rhythm and wonderful ending. Nate

Beautiful write. The flow was superb, the rhymes were perfect. Your words were strong, and beautifully crafted.

Beautiful rhymes Kim, I really enjoyed this poem, like all of your work. I loved the ending, hmm, I've been reading a lot of poems with Shakespeare titles in it. Great stuff, he was one of my favourites!

That is awesome!

Kim, must I compliment you again? I mean, there's only so much I can say about your wonderful writing. You are truly talented. GO COUGARS!!!

Nicely done, Kim!

"But the price that was demanded
Is not one I want to pay
It would mean the death of hope
And my values to betray"
^^^ Excellent message within your words... Awesome ending, very powerful!