The Walk

by aaron c s   May 23, 2006


I'll be loving every minute,
Of every day that had you in it.
And as we walk down the avenue,
I'll love every minute with you.

With the Autumn's breeze,
We'll both go swimming in a sea of leaves,
Then sit in the willow's shade,
Looking up at heaven's gates.

As we walk briskly through the park,
Looking at eachother and having a long talk.
As we feels Fall's cool air,
I feel we have more and more to share.

Every little look, every little glance,
Let's me know I still have a chance.
So i walk into the unknown,
Into her arms and out of my comfort zone.

The walk in day turns to night,
We walk with t he moon as our light.
A feeling goes over me that's indescribable,
The soon turns to a feeling incontainable!

My pace slows and hers follows,
I stop not knowing how this is gonna go.
And as we listen to the trickle of the stream,
I look in her eyes and tell her of my dream.

"We were sitting on the beach,
Looking out at the beautiful sea,
Laying on the sand with you in my embrace,
And couldn't keep my eyes off your intoxicating face.

"I told you we'd never be apart,
And you would always have a place in my heart.
Then i pulled you closer to make love in the sun."
And that's when i told her the dream was done.

I grab her hand and start to walk again,
As she caresses my fingers, I know we're more than friends.
In my heart I'm singing a love song,
I've been waiting for this moment for oh so long!

I stop and look in her eyes,
This is no time for me to be shy.
I really hope she feels this too!
I finally say "I love you."

What a beautiful end of a beautiful walk,
Where we shared and where we talked,
I know we'll do this again,
Since this love will never end.

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  • 17 years ago

    by uNfOrGiVeNsiN335

    Whats the deal with you n prae? dating or what? i dont get it. anyway ya havent talk to you in days

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    This is good, but if I can just make one tiny suggestion? I would say it's a little over-long, and there's one line that doesn't sit right:

    As we feels Fall's air,
    I feel we have more and more to share."

    You've used a lot of really good description to set the scene, and that first line there is too short compared to the rest of the poem. Maybe "As we feel Fall's cool, damp air" or something?

    Otherwise a nice poem. :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    I cant read your poems anymore..they make mine look bad haha...very good and touching...hope you get to take that walk...take care

    Victoria

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    I cant read your poems anymore..they make mine look bad haha...very good and touching...hope you get to take that walk...take care

    Victoria

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    I cant read your poems anymore..they make mine look bad haha...very good and touching...hope you get to take that walk...take care

    Victoria

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