This was cute and I liked it a lot. It explains how every woman or girl feels. We just want to feel safe in the arms of the guy we love and to have them holdin' us tight. I loved it. I want to read more.

xox Tiffany

Wow really good, excellent
nicely spoken
and i can really relate

well done!

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Awww! that was soo sweet! i l.o.v.e.d it! so much! i love your writing! it is so original and emotional and just so.. beautifuL! every poem of yours that i read makes me either smile or cry! you're an amazing poet and you should neverr stop writing! 10/5

Kool poem!!!

Wow! great job i really enjoyed the read! i liked it a lot!

**meggie**

"Craving your compassionately embrasive hold"
'embracive', not 'embrasive'
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"Yearning you arrival as time runs tight"
'your' not 'you'
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"Lip’s clutching too secretive wishes firmly and tight"
no apostrophe needed in 'lips'
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"Please don’t let me slip from you strong loving hold"
'your' not 'you', and I'd put a comma after 'strong'.
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"To write one you first think of a three word sentance."
I think you mean:
"To write one you first think of a three line stanza"
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I thought the form was a very interesting one; one I had never encountered before, and it made reading the poem very interesting.