One night

by Nelle   May 23, 2006


He seemed so nice
he got my drinks and kissed my cheek
he said he would help me
but what he really meant, was hurt me.

The night went on
i got more drunk, and did more drugs
he took my hand
and said come with me.

We got away from the party
we were isolated to ourselves
this is what he wanted all along
how could i have been so dumb.

He got me in this room
took my drink and said lay down
he grabbed my arm and took control
i tried to run out the door

the screams got louder
the pain was intense
the more i cried
the more he went.

People came to the door
he wouldn't get up he wouldn't stop
he left them there to bang in pain

He said, don't worry i will get them away
I will take care of you, all you need is me

I tried to move i tried to get up
nothing seemed to work
He held me tighter
never letting go.

People got in, the door finally broke down
only to see him doing things that should have never been done.

I couldn't move
they threw him off of me
started beating on him
and realized he was all pretend

He was not this nice guy that i met
earlier that night
he turned out to be such a fright

I will never forget
he will always be with me
weather i want to believe it or not
it will always be there
I will never forget.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. Geez, I hope this really didn't happen to you. =( ..It's so sad.

    A really good poem though, had my attention all the way wanting to know what happens, Your emotions were expressed so clearly that I could actually picture what was going on and how that person would have been feeling. Great poem, hun. Keep it up!! xx.

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awww that's so sad...I'm sorry you wrote about such a topic. It's a hard topic to read or write about..

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    That is the saddest poem of yours I have read. definitly my favorite!!!! it was so unique and I loved it it flowed nicely too. great job

    ~~Retniapdoolb

  • 18 years ago

    by NATALIE

    Aww im sorry this happened to you i would have done anything so you wouldnt have gone through that i love u

  • 18 years ago

    by keisha

    Im sorry that happened to you, but now you can help other girls before this happens agin. i feel your pain, i wnet thru the same thing, only he got away with it, your lucky, at least he got what was coming. keep writing and good job!

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